Description reads quite well but could be broken into sections again.
Recommend breaking up the bio into shorter lines. Consider using emoji’s to break up the text. Also adding a call-to-action such as “Book Your Custom Snow Holiday with us Today. Click Here…” to direct traffic to your website.
I would also consider removing the Sydney, Australia address from your bio as I feel this can create some confusion for the potential customer. Happy to have more of a chat about this however and find out if there is a specific reason the address is there.