Love this bio. Short and sweet but to the point. It also has a call-to-action which is great.
I’d like to find out a little more about what you’d like the call-to-action to be. If you’re happy with customers calling the phone number then you could leave as is, but ideally I would aim to send them to your website where they could potentially book an appointment, buy a product etc.
Happy to talk more about this if you like.
Also, is this profile setup as a business page? I’m asking because I think it could benefit from an address and email button.