tommyloose

Profile Picture is a characterized image of Tommy with with website below in small text.

Keep the logo the same but zoom in on the image more and remove the website text on the image. It’s too small to read anyway and the full bearded cartoon guy looks great.

 Description is good but could be broken up a little neater with better sentencing and possibly some emoji’s. Website is mentioned twice

 I recommend removing the website text from your description because it’s already your bio link. Add a call-to-action encouraging users to click the link. For example; “For bookings follow the link below” etc

Try and get each area (G7th, Fingerstyle Hub etc) on a seperate line just so it reads a little easier.

Eight story highlights currently.

 Add cover images to these highlights to give your profile a more standardized theme.

 Posting once or twice per week in newsfeed. No stories at time of Health Check. Using some hashtags but could do more.

We need to get your posting more frequently. Aim to post at least once per day in your newsfeed and 5-6 stories. Use 20-30 hashtags and consider adding a question with some of your posts to encourage more comments from followers.

 Newsfeed grid looks ok but could do with some cleaning up.

Work on keeping your best photos and videos for your newsfeed and posting everything else in your stories. Try to work to a consistent theme/style so that your grid flows a little better.

Responding to some comments.

Work on replying to every comment posted by your followers. This will really help to build more followers and to strengthen your relationship with them.