Description is good but could be broken up a little neater with better sentencing and possibly some emoji’s. Website is mentioned twice
I recommend removing the website text from your description because it’s already your bio link. Add a call-to-action encouraging users to click the link. For example; “For bookings follow the link below” etc
Try and get each area (G7th, Fingerstyle Hub etc) on a seperate line just so it reads a little easier.